Dreams come…
Dreams gone…
A dark room,
And
A small red light…
A girl…
Sleeping……
Unconscious…
Dreaming deeply…
Smiling…
For
Someone special…
Innocence…
On her face,
Her dream
Makes her smile,
She doesn’t know
It’s fragile…
She was crying
Before sleeping
Then
She slept…
Frustration
Was on her face…
Night is ending
I touched her…
Wanted
To take her
To heaven…
But…
Her soul denies…
But,
It’s crying…
For refusing…
Come with me…
Avoid pain…
It’s insane…
She says…
“Happiness in pain…
Hope in pain…
Laughter in pain…
These are what
She seeks…
And
She knows…
She is insane…”
She says..
“Heaven doesn’t need her
So,
She chooses hell…
It’s her journey…
She wants to go
Alone…
In the light…
In the dark…
In hells sin…
Or,
In heavens spark…”
Oh!
I’ve to go…
It’s morning…
My destiny is calling…
She wakes up…
Saw the sky
The sun is bright…
She moves out of sight…
I pray…
I pray for her…
It’s a new day…
Hope she’ll find…
A new ray…
Which won’t
Make her blind…
6 comments:
you've exquisite imagination
Looks like someone is uttering out sudden phrases at random.You have a touch of imagination.It consists more of phrases rather than complete sentences.Good at bursts, at certain ends quite ordinary.
Keep writing.
New style I must say!
Appreciate your work : keep it up!
i see that u've adopted a totally new style of writing... all that i can say about it.. u're growing up dramatically, my friend !!
oops! i see that it is almost a replica of the above comment by sushir, bt i swear i never noticed it... :P
very "complete", your post!
it's not the technique or format that i would chose to comment on.
it's the theme and it's presentation.
lovely and awesome.
and a nice way to show the crowd that all "ghosts" are not "bad".
:) :)
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