"Breathe ..
Breathe in the air"
The air is thin in my moon
Its hard to breathe..
A long day of lost paradise
I live amongst you
I die in the absence of moon.
So , I keep walking on the dark side of moon..
There is more to me than you see
A eclipse of thoughts echoes through dusk
Anonymous glow beneath my eyes
A surprise gone wrong
May be , there was more to it
Than you and me walking ..
There was more to it ..
The noon may not speak anymore
But the midnight will surely do its part
Midnight moon shines on you ..
"Shine on you crazy Diamonds
Now there's a look in your eyes , like black holes in the sky"
13 comments:
nice composition... subhro+pink floyd..
nice thought behind this....
"There is more to me than you see
A eclipse of thoughts echoes through dusk"....
khub sundor hoychhe....
Well done!
There's no more than that what I could say.
Hi people
I do not know what to give for Christmas of the to friends, advise something ....
@ ananymous:
give them this poem.
along with it's picture!
..well, not sure, .. ok. drop the picture. who wishes to go on a sombre mood in christmas?
what does shuvro say?
Hello. Good day
Who listens to what music?
I Love songs Justin Timberlake and Paris Hilton
hope somebody else also interacts with you..
i see that they are all so quiet!
ki shob bhulbhal lokjon !
bote...??
". Next: Reviewing and revising your writing"..
someone like me need help there !
@ anonymous:
you can easily put in your name there. don't be anonymous.
@anonymous:
..and WHAT EXACTLY are they?
@anonymous:
very nice.
but it seems that we just don't care to understand.
thank you.
this is a literary site.
post poems if you can write them.
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