Once
On a evening
Indolence hold my hand
And took me
To a dark land….
It asked me to believe;
And I saw
Flowers in a dozen…
In my mind
All of a sudden…
And
I started my journey…
Leaving my root…
Behind…
So free
From mind…
But not blind…
With trust
In my heart…
With chances
Of getting hurt…
I……
Saw a spin on path
Lights gone…
Lighter…
Closed my eyes…
No roses were there
Only another twist
On the path…
I……
Left my desires
Only dreams came
With me…
On desert…
On lonely path…
In search of light……
The search did seem
Meaningless…
Suddenly…
With a fragrance
I found a pathway
With a new beam of ray…
You….
Were standing there
With stretched arms
Full of warmth…
As if you crave
All my pain
On you like rain…
That moment…
Mesmerized my thought…
When I felt no hurt…
And found my head
Resting…
On your shoulder…
So happy
Felt like dying
I couldn’t…
But crying…
6 comments:
Lovely and Beautiful!!!
Keep going!!!
Yep!! It can be an illusion but the poem is not and neithere is it's beauty!!!
Really good!!
he he.
a nice poem, nabanita.
you seem to carry on working with this so-tough-to-tackle technique of yours..
and you have really come off with flying colours, in this post, in the writing department.
and on what is written, criticising with my brain, no huge theme to write about, this is!
and with my heart, well, ..ah,
..i have something to say after reading this:
SAME TO YOU!!!
:) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
@deba- thanks so much
@akaash- aah well...i know the theme is a very simple one...
& about style....he he...:) :)
@akaash- aah.. well.... i know it :)
@anonymous:
we enjoyed them profusely. thank you.
don't repeat please.
this is a literary site.
post poems on sex if you can.
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